The lines on the faces are very clear. I kinda like it like that. it's very define. Your teeth are much better than my Missy's teeth on my project. You did good
I like the shading in it. Its very detailed. The pose you guys did looks like it was to your advantage. You can tell the different textures in it. wery nice drawling all together, great job.
dear Yerlin, I think this is very good;; the shading is good the faces are like funny looking thoo lol Zoe's is the funniest[: buahahahah. lol idk <3 Nancy J.[:
Since you asked me for my opinion, nice composition and values. Your faces look good in their shapes. The hands look a little awkward though, a good way to draw hands is to draw the outline of a hand, very light. Then fill in the fingers.
Now I would imagine Zoe and Missy are young too. In a young lady, the creases under the nose are not so dark. Its very aging for the poor things. Lines and wrinkles should be drawn lightly if at all with a soft gentle touch. On a young woman, everything should be soft and fuzzy, not thick, harsh lines. Even an old woman would rather be drawn softly.
Try drawing with pastels, or even powdered charcoal with a brush, see how soft you can make a girl's skin.
There is no reason you cannot draw every day. Once a month is not enough. It looks like you have a good eye and just need lots of practice. Draw anything, things in the house, outside, plants, boats, cars, anything. If it doesn't come out, do not worry it is only practice. After 100 days of drawing you can look back on this one and see the difference.
I like how the lines on the faces are clear. good job
ReplyDeleteThe lines on the faces are very clear. I kinda like it like that. it's very define. Your teeth are much better than my Missy's teeth on my project. You did good
ReplyDeleteI like the shading in it. Its very detailed. The pose you guys did looks like it was to your advantage. You can tell the different textures in it. wery nice drawling all together, great job.
ReplyDeletedear Yerlin,
ReplyDeleteI think this is very good;;
the shading is good
the faces are like funny looking thoo lol
Zoe's is the funniest[:
buahahahah. lol idk
<3
Nancy J.[:
Hi Yerlin,
ReplyDeleteSince you asked me for my opinion, nice composition and values. Your faces look good in their shapes. The hands look a little awkward though, a good way to draw hands is to draw the outline of a hand, very light. Then fill in the fingers.
Now I would imagine Zoe and Missy are young too. In a young lady, the creases under the nose are not so dark. Its very aging for the poor things. Lines and wrinkles should be drawn lightly if at all with a soft gentle touch. On a young woman, everything should be soft and fuzzy, not thick, harsh lines. Even an old woman would rather be drawn softly.
Try drawing with pastels, or even powdered charcoal with a brush, see how soft you can make a girl's skin.
There is no reason you cannot draw every day. Once a month is not enough. It looks like you have a good eye and just need lots of practice. Draw anything, things in the house, outside, plants, boats, cars, anything. If it doesn't come out, do not worry it is only practice. After 100 days of drawing you can look back on this one and see the difference.
Yerlin, looks awesome! nice detail and shadowing!
ReplyDeleteI like all the details
ReplyDeleteYerlin Your picture is very neat.
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